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Friday, November 2, 2018

Te Kauru Camp 2018 (writing 2nd Draft)

Before we arrived at rainbows end  you could see the fear fall scary and tall. At rainbows end there Was a ride called the invader When I got on the invader there were these things that would push on your back. Then the person who locks the back hannist they come to check if it's tight enough so that. When they push the button you don't go falling out of your seat. on the invader you start swinging off the edges as you go higher and higher.There was one tour thing called manic house in the manic house.There was a lot of spokie bed rooms and in
Each room there was heaps of scary things like a fridge that had Human heads inside of it all so a prison and more scary stuff even a bedroom with an old granny sitting on the Rocking chair also there was a chair that you could sit on well we sat down holly took a picture.Then after that we
went on the roller coaster which gave you a lot of
Butterflies when you Went on the big dip that lead you to the big loop after the loop there was a bit that made your head hit the side of the
Bars which made my head a little sore.Sometimes the person who started the ride would let you go three times.After the roller coaster we went to the dodgems me
Nate and jayden beeped on crashing into each other after a while other people came to have a turn so we had to leave because the lady stopped the ride then. Holly Nate and kordal and daniel wanted to go on the FEAR FALL but me and Jayden sat down by the tables




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    1. Thank you kayden very much for your feed back

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  2. well done I love how you explained the rides you loved but the photo limit was three

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  3. nice on ethan i rwally liked it at rainbows end

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  4. Nice work Ethan I really enjoyed reading this text

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